Monday, October 13, 2014

synthesis rough draft

Brady Terry
Debra Reece
English 2010
Oct. 13 2014
Synthesis
Tom Arrandale and Reed Karaim both address the issue of the loss of biodiversity, or loss of diversity in nature.  Karaim addresses agricultures while Arrandale addresses the broader more worldwide issue of coastal wetlands, rainforests, and our lack of using nature to help us prevent this deterioration of earth’s ecosystems.  Both authors address the issue of time and specifically the lack thereof.
            I would like to discuss some of the main points addressed in these two articles.  These points are; the effects and possible effects that come from a loss of biodiversity, things being done to preserve biodiversity, and what needs to be done to further the preservation of biodiversity.  I would then like to address the issue of time which is talked about in both articles.  I feel like these are things that both authors discussed well, and that they both have similar arguments concerning the issues.
            There are many adverse effects that come from a loss of biodiversity.  This is the first thing that I would like to address.  In the article written by Reed Karaim he talks about how we have taken away so many different varieties of our food bearing plants as we have genetically altered them to our desire.  We have done this for several reasons. Some of which are heavier, quicker crop yields. He claims that even the seed bank in different parts of the world that store hundreds of thousands of different varieties of seeds won’t be able to help us in a worldwide catastrophe, because we have lost so much diversity and the gestation time for these plants is too long to rely upon for our safety. (Karaim) Tom Arrandale talks in his article about the effects of hurricanes and tsunamis and how they have worsened over time. He says that research has found that this is because of the destruction of coastal wetlands for housing and shrimp farming.  The destruction and removal of these critical ecosystems has taken away the buffer zone from these storms.  (Arrandale)  Both authors feel like our impact on the environment has been negative.
            Although both authors address these negitave issues that arise from the loss of biodiversity and the destruction of ecosystems, they also address some of the things being done to preserve the biodiversity that remains.  Karaim talks about farmers and how some are starting to plant more diversified crops in order to prevent total destruction of the world’s crop supply due to disease or pestilence.  He also talks about the seed banks as being a good start to biological preservation.  (Karaim)  Arrandale talks about some of the different organizations and how they are both funding and protecting earth’s natural habitats by creating hydro-electric energy from hydro-electric plants and preserving sections of forest and mountain areas around the world.  (Arrandale)
            Both authors however, feel that more needs to be done to ensure a thriving environment for the future.  Karaim states, “Farmers have been the custodians of biodiversity, and they need support.” (Karaim)  He also explains that without our support, through funding and active help, what the farmers are doing won’t be enough. (Karaim)  Arrandale addresses another similar issue.  He begins his article by talking about the need for more government funding, but shifts his focus to us not using the resources nature has given us.  He believes that costs of preservation can be cut back by using things nature has given us such as honey bees.  He gives an example from Costa Rica’s coffee plantations that once covered the country side.  He states, “Scientists calculated that native bees provided 60,000 dollars a year in pollination services to a Costa Rican coffee plantation.” ( Arrandale)  He then goes on to tell how those plantations now grow products that don’t require pollination.  Therefore, that resource that nature has given us of the honey bees is now going unused or essentially wasted. (Arrandale) Both authors are very passionate about the need for change, especially the need for added help in making a change in our actions.
            The last connection made between the articles which I would like to address is summed up by Tom Arrandale when he states, “I worry that we’re not going to have enough time.”  Both Karaim and Arrandale end their articles with similar statements.  They fear that at the rate the ecosystems are declining, we won’t be able to work fast enough without the help from people other than conservationists. However, I feel that Tom Arrandale better addresses this particular issue.  Even though both authors feel strongly about the need for change Reed Karaim doesn’t make as much of an effort to urge readers to do more and do it quickly.  This leads me to ask.  How much time is left?  What happens when this time runs out?  Have we destroyed biodiversity to the point of irreversability?
                                                                     







Works Cited
Arrandale, Tom. "Calculating the Value of Ecosystem 'Services'" CQ Researcher. 30 Nov. 2007. Web. 2 Oct. 2014. <http://library.cqpress.com/cqresearcher/>.

Karaim, Reed. “Inside the ‘Doomsday Vault’ Hope for Survival.” (2012).  Print.

Tuesday, October 7, 2014

reflection on writing proposal #2

    In writing my proposal I honestly just looked over the things that we were told to look at in class and use in our writing.  I feel like having a basic outline helps me more than anything to know what the teacher would like to see in a paper.  I feel like my proposal is pretty good.  I felt like I used all of the necessary strategies we were told to use and that it shows well the direction I would like to take my synthesis of the two papers.  I don't think I have any questions about the unit on researching because it is something that is pretty straight forward and the little that was talked about in class was enough for me to understand what was expected.  I honestly don't know how much writing a proposal will help me with the actual synthesis paper because I haven't done it yet, but I feel like it is a lot of extra work that could probably be done in a brainstorming session. After doing several assignments of Rhetoric I feel like I understand pretty well its purpose.

writing proposal #2

Brady Terry
Professor Debra Reece
Writing Proposal
6 October 2014
Writing Proposal
                The article that I read and chose to do my synthesis on is titled, “Calculating the Value of Ecosystem ‘Service’”.  It was written by Tom Arrandale and published in the CQ Researcher on Nov. 30 2007.  This article is addressed to Ecologists and Economists as well as to Biologists and Conservationists.  It talks about some of the adverse effects that come from a loss of biodiversity in several fields, and addresses steps that are being taken to preserve what biodiversity we have left.
                The article begins by talking about the destruction caused by hurricanes and tsunamis around the world and the similar destruction of coastal wetlands before the hurricane’s coming.   It states that the wetlands and coastal mangroves that once protected the affected areas have been destroyed to create living space and shrimp farms.  The article then goes on to talk about how when we destroy these and other areas, we prevent the world from being able to naturally prevent disasters.  It continues by talking about the importance of the different ecosystems and their roles in our well-being.
                The article concludes by talking about some of the different things that are now being done to preserve the diversity of ecosystems and large areas of land around the world.  It covers examples from hydroelectric plants to preserving areas of the rain forest.  It also talks about how we can better use the things that nature has given us such as honey bees for the preservation of ourselves and the world around us.  However, it concludes with a caution saying, “I worry that we’re not going to have enough time.” Thus addressing the concern that we have destroyed earth’s natural resources to a point where we will never be able to repair them to their natural state.
                In my synthesis I would like to compare the ways that the articles address the use of funds and resources to preserve biodiversity.  They both talk about different fields of study in the preservation of biodiversity, but they are interconnected.  I will compare the way that the farmers and biologists are preserving biodiversity from the first article that I read to the way that ecologists and the government funding they receive go to preserving biodiversity in coastal and forested areas.  I will also look at the way natural preservation was looked at in the second article and see if something similar is happening in what was addressed in the first article.

                There isn’t much that contrasts between the articles and I would like to look further into the last sentence of the second article because it is something else that is discussed by both authors: the fear that we have run out of time to really be able to preserve biodiversity as we know it. I think that this will give me something good to work with in synthesis of the two articles.

Thursday, October 2, 2014

Reading Reflection #3

     The section of reading I just did was in Ch. 6 of the text book and was titled, "Identifying Sources."  The Ideas I had about researching my paper and writing accordingly have changed quite a bit as I read.  The chapter talked about lots of different sources available for finding research material.  One that I had never previously thought of was to talk to a professor in the field of study that I am writing about.  I think this could be a very effective use of my time.
     I think that knowing what I do now about researching will help my paper to have more of a backbone and be more on track and convincing.  The sources I learned about will help me strengthen my thesis and may even change the subject or argument of my writing.